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dorianwinter

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Edge of the Verse playtest
« on: May 23, 2017, 01:18:08 PM »
Hi everybody. We are a group of game designers from the cold Russia. Couple of years ago we published our space opera game ????? ?????????. Powered by the Apocalypse, it provided players with everything they needed to launch any type of spacefaring adventures with easy to learn rules.

When we finished the second edition, we decided to move further and present our game to English-speaking audience. The game is called Edge of the Verse and you can find playtest materials here:

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/rokxh90dljzm8y2/AAAvmja1mfrSgHxuG5ShaZhQa?dl=0

We will appreciate any feedback and will answer any questions with pleasure.

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Re: Edge of the Verse playtest
« Reply #1 on: May 23, 2017, 08:17:29 PM »
This looks quite interesting. One note, though:

You should get someone to edit or proofread your text. There are issues with grammar in many places, which makes it harder for your text to communicate ideas accurately to the reader.

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Re: Edge of the Verse playtest
« Reply #2 on: May 24, 2017, 06:00:18 AM »
Thank you for the reply.

You're right. We are looking for a native speacker who can help us with the proofreading and adptation.