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« on: June 21, 2010, 01:59:04 PM » |
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Hey, I think Timothy Kleinert's name needs to have an "ert" not an "art" at the end, on pages 287 and 288.
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lumpley
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« Reply #1 on: June 21, 2010, 02:30:45 PM » |
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Thanks, Gregor.
(Argh! I thought I checked that!)
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« Reply #2 on: June 21, 2010, 07:14:30 PM » |
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The first time Grief is mentioned on page 148, his name isn't capitalized.
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Gregor Hutton
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« Reply #3 on: June 21, 2010, 11:19:07 PM » |
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Page 6, end of second para: "From this, the world’s psychic maelstrom, we none of us have shelter."
Is that "we know that..." or just "...none of us have shelter."?
Page 7, under Brainer is a word that I don't understand: "accountrement". Is it "accoutrement" (a trapping)?
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lumpley
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« Reply #4 on: June 22, 2010, 01:29:07 AM » |
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From an astute reader via email: p139 in Grotesques/Pain addict you have "impules" instead of "impulse" |
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« Reply #5 on: June 22, 2010, 07:32:54 AM » |
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The “you already know all there is to know” clause is there, but I’ve never used it and I hope you never do too. That's an awkward turn of phrase, thought I'd point it out. |
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Simon JB
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« Reply #6 on: June 22, 2010, 01:10:07 PM » |
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Pg 15, Harm, 2nd para: "It the player" -> "If the player".
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lumpley
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« Reply #7 on: June 22, 2010, 07:10:04 PM » |
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Another from email: pg 15 under Harm and Healing..
"*It* the player marks the segment 11:00 . . ."
Should be *if, *i'm guessing.
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« Reply #8 on: June 22, 2010, 08:00:24 PM » |
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Like I said above. ;)
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« Reply #9 on: June 22, 2010, 08:11:14 PM » |
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Maybe I'll fix it twice, too. That'll teach it!
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« Reply #10 on: June 23, 2010, 12:18:26 PM » |
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On page 36, the Brainer Special refers to a "deep brain scan (p5)". This is actually on page 34. Presumably it's on page 5 of the mini booklet version of the Brainer.
Same thing with the Savvyhead Special on page 78.
And again on page 84 for the Skinner Special.
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« Reply #11 on: June 23, 2010, 01:18:02 PM » |
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Another from email: on p84 a reference to p8 probably meant to say p83 for
Hypnotize. -Vincent |
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« Reply #12 on: June 23, 2010, 01:24:05 PM » |
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In the Maestro D' Hx section: On the others’ turns, choose your favorite character; ignore the
number that player tells you and write Hx+3 insted. |
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Seth Ben-Ezra
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« Reply #13 on: June 23, 2010, 03:05:36 PM » |
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In the list of grotesque moves: Ruin something. Defoul, rot, desecrate, corrupt, adulter it. should be Befoul |
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« Reply #14 on: June 24, 2010, 08:26:19 PM » |
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p. 113 Once you have the player’s answer, build on it. I mean three
things by that: (1) barf apocalyptica upon it, by adding detailsand
imagery of your own; Note the "detailsand" missing a space. This makes the text hyphenate funny, FYI. |
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