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lumpley
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« on: July 12, 2010, 01:17:23 AM » |
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The final PDFs are at the Forge Bookshelf now. Go redownload! They include a 1-page-per-page version, a spreads version, and a printer-nonviolent spreads version with only the smallest images left in. They don't include the cover yet. (None of you want to print it out anyway, it'll use up $14 worth of ink.) I'll add the cover later in the month, and announce it here when I do. Final book PDFs! Hooray! -Vincent
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« Reply #1 on: July 12, 2010, 02:23:45 AM » |
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Sweet! Any chance of a summary of the significant rules-type changes from the preapocalypse version? Are there any?
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lumpley
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« Reply #2 on: July 12, 2010, 01:10:56 PM » |
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There might be one or two insignificant rules-type changes, I don't remember, but there aren't any significant ones. It's all typo corrections, layout, various prettifications.
-Vincent
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« Reply #3 on: July 12, 2010, 05:36:21 PM » |
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It may be too late now, but from the very first paragraph:
"From this, the world's psychic maelstrom, we none of us have shelter."
Might want to delete that "we".
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« Reply #4 on: July 12, 2010, 05:41:23 PM » |
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That "we" is crucial to the sentence!
Get used to it, you'll find more like it.
-Vincent
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« Reply #5 on: July 12, 2010, 07:10:28 PM » |
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Cool. I'd made that line for authorial voice/implied setting rather than a typo. Glad it's unchanged.
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« Reply #6 on: July 12, 2010, 07:25:06 PM » |
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Oh, yeah, I love that we and Michael hates it. Just a flavor thing.
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A player of mine playing a gunlugger - "So now that I took infinite knives, I'm setting up a knife store." Me - "....what?" Him - "Yeah, I figure with no overhead, I'm gonna make a pretty nice profit." Me - "......"
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« Reply #7 on: July 12, 2010, 07:27:47 PM » |
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Oh, yeah, I love that we and Michael hates it. Just a flavor thing.
You're right. I can't stand it. I'm gonna white it out in my copy. ;)
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« Reply #8 on: July 13, 2010, 12:05:43 PM » |
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Oh, yeah, I love that we and Michael hates it. Just a flavor thing.
You're right. I can't stand it. I'm gonna white it out in my copy. ;) You're the worst.
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A player of mine playing a gunlugger - "So now that I took infinite knives, I'm setting up a knife store." Me - "....what?" Him - "Yeah, I figure with no overhead, I'm gonna make a pretty nice profit." Me - "......"
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« Reply #9 on: July 13, 2010, 06:18:30 PM » |
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Final PDFs.
Man. So exciting!
Congrats, Vincent.
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Matt Wilson
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« Reply #10 on: July 14, 2010, 02:26:09 PM » |
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Final PDFs.
Man. So exciting!
Congrats, Vincent.
If Meg ships my copy of the book before she ships John's, she can mark experience.
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« Reply #11 on: July 14, 2010, 06:46:39 PM » |
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I get to mark experience just by breathing, Wilson.
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« Reply #12 on: July 17, 2010, 01:39:09 PM » |
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Very nice!
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